Tuesday, 3 October 2017

10.1 #Supercrit


Peer feedback:


  • The colour scheme is good and feeling fitting for the subject matter. However, the yellow is a bit harsh; should be made softer/more orangey.
  • Feels directed at kids without being too childish - good!
  • Make more directed at the kid; maybe a moving pack given by the old school before leaving OR by the new school upon arrival
  • Push the app more. Don't downplay it as optional; confidently promote it.
  • Add a little bit more to the pamphlet template (label lines for date/location) so it's not just a bunch of lines.
  • Carsickness should be considered in the moving day section on the website
To do next:
  • Print text yellows - find a good one.

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