Class 3.2 - Critiquing our Visual Brief

Our printed visual brief for this week:

Peer Feedback:

Things to keep:

• Colours are strong; fit the subject matter (buses)
• Clearly laid out
• Readable narrative
• Fitting images
• Concise and believable

Things to change:

• Play with the scale of the images
• More visual information (infographics rather than just written stats)
• Cover illustration doesn't match the style of the rest of the images
• Some of the wording on the "Needs" page is confusing
• More quotes from the public to make it feel more relatable

For next class:

- Make changes to our booklet based on the feedback
- Preparation for our presentation (>90secs) of our visual brief (on Friday)